The story of Jacqueline, Countess of Hainault, is a revelation, a treasure trove for any novelist¹, and Gregory recounts it smartly and with nuance.
Jacqueline is not, however, the novel’s protagonist, a role given to the woman who becomes her lady-in-waiting, protégée, and eventual replacement as wife to Humphrey, Duke of Gloucester, in the 15th century.
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| Pub. by William Morrow (US/Can), HarperCollins (UK) |
Eleanor Cobham² is likewise sterling material for fiction, given her remarkable rise from relative obscurity to second lady of the realm during the Hundred Years’ War. Then, following accusations of treasonable necromancy (!) against the king, she swiftly fell into disgrace and out of public view. In Gregory’s interpretation, the book’s title is apt and accurate.
The prolific Gregory, of course, has featured witchy women before, including in an early novel, The Wise Woman (1992)³. In her author’s note⁴ for Royal Witch, she shares her longtime interest in Cobham and that she’d persuaded her friend, historian David Baldwin, to pen Cobham’s biography, which was left unfinished at his death. Gregory inherited his manuscript and, expressing gratitude to him, explains that she incorporated the material into what she calls “one of my most fictional novels.”⁵
Jacqueline and Eleanor: their tales are inextricably entwined. Their interpersonal dynamics shed light on who they are, and their linked stories create a novel that’s refreshingly new in parts, weighted with tropes in others.
Eleanor’s narration begins promisingly, as a young woman who craftily engineers a way out of a future in a convent. In 1421, she travels to Henry V’s royal court with the goal of catching a noble husband. She attaches herself to Countess Jacqueline, who’s in London seeking a champion. The heiress to her late father’s lands in the Low Countries and what’s now northern France, Jacqueline sees her rightful inheritance challenged by her estranged husband and her cousin, the Duke of Burgundy. The situation is complex: England’s at war with France, with Burgundy as England’s ally, making Jacqueline’s demands inconvenient.
Then an unexpected death throws England into turmoil. Gregory steers through the political maze with precision and clarity. Humphrey of Gloucester, King Henry’s youngest brother, takes up Jacqueline’s cause out of chivalry (or so Eleanor initially perceives) and later marries her—an act of questionable legality.
Through Eleanor’s first-person narrative, we follow her, Jacqueline, Humphrey, and his English army across the channel, their travels strikingly illustrated via scenes of the land’s cities and towns. Their varied customs are a pleasure to discover. Seeing Jacqueline’s pride in her own leadership and her elegant palace at Le Quesnoy, Eleanor swells with ambition, envisioning a model for what she herself could be. But Jacqueline’s strong, single-minded manner—it’s unwomanly—causes her husband to take offense. This grants Eleanor an opening.
She laughs shortly. ‘How many people does he need to fuss over him?’
I smile. ‘He’s a prince,” I remind her. “He needs a court full of people fussing over him.’
‘Yes, do,” she says. “You remember the wifely things I can’t be bothered with.’
Back in England, Eleanor takes advantage of her position by maneuvering her way to high levels of power, a status beyond her wildest hopes. Yet her objectives turn dark and viciously spiteful after a perceived personal betrayal, a motive that's purely fictional. The herbalist Margery Jourdemayne, an enjoyable character, is one of many drawn into her evil web. Meanwhile, a secret relationship that later gives rise to the Tudor dynasty unfolds in a well-conceived subplot.
It’s one thing to depict Eleanor’s transformation from ambitious naivete to cold shrewdness, a progression that Gregory handles well. But it’s another to have her heroine devolve into stereotype, with lines like: “This is the moment I have waited for and the time to make my move” and “I want you to make dark magic… the darkest of the magic.”
The author’s distracting tendency to repeat words for emphasis, fortunately absent early on, emerges as the plot continues. One example paragraph has six sentences beginning with “She says.” In the end, with the reader trapped within Eleanor’s malignant delusions for much too long, the final chapters arrive with a sense of relief.
Gregory is very capable at writing power-hungry women, even malicious ones, with greater levels of shading than this. Despite the less-than-subtle approach, this will be a vital read for Gregory's fans—particularly since this precedes her other Plantagenet novels—plus anyone wishing to step into unfamiliar royal territory. But don’t be surprised if tolerance for Eleanor runs out before the novel’s pages do.
Royal Witch was published on Oct. 20 by William Morrow/HarperCollins (US/Can) and HarperCollins (UK).
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Notes:
1. Some years ago I bought a copy of Hilda Lewis’ I, Jacqueline (1957), a biographical novel about her. It was rare at the time, so I was excited to get my hands on it. Unfortunately, I found it so dull that I barely read half of it. It was republished in 2008.
2. Eleanor Cobham figures as a main character in Jean Plaidy’s Epitaph for Three Women (1983), which I vaguely remember reading decades ago, and in Tony Riches’ The Secret Diary of Eleanor Cobham (2014), which I haven’t yet read.
3. See my earlier review of The Wise Woman (reissued 2008), about a novice-turned-dark witch in Tudor England; there are many similarities in plot and character to this one.
4. In the eARC I read from Edelweiss, the author’s note is at the beginning of the book. The final published version appears to include it at the end, based on the Amazon snippet.
5. I’d love to have read Baldwin’s nonfiction manuscript, to glean the facts without the heavy fictional embellishments.











