Mary Wollstonecraft is perhaps best known for two accomplishments: A Vindication of the Rights of Woman (1792), a treatise that caused her to be remembered as the first feminist; and her status as the mother of Mary Shelley, author of Frankenstein.
As significant as these are, Wollstonecraft’s life was extraordinary for many other reasons. N.J. Mastro’s biographical novel explores them in depth, lavishing equal time on her innermost feelings and outward actions, as well as the tumult stirred up when they conflicted.
Wollstonecraft didn’t just talk the talk: she walked the walk, serving as an example of her belief that if women were given more than the limited education that society deemed appropriate, their intellectual and social development would flourish. Following an effective short prologue in which she tries and fails to protect her mother from her drunk father’s abuse, we meet Mary at twenty-eight, just as she’s being let go from her position as governess to an aristocratic Irish family’s daughters. The girls adore her, but her teachings are too broad and academic for their mother’s liking.
This setback spurs Mary to “make her own way in the world as a solitary woman,” heading to London to “live by her pen” in England’s literary capital. To earn a living, she accepts an invitation to review books for a progressive new journal – at a time when reviewing was competitive, well-paid, and mostly done by men!
Mary’s passions spring to life: her absorption into the lively community at the home of her publisher Joseph Johnson, where she holds her own at dinner conversations when she’s the only woman present; her determination to share her ideas through writing, despite Mr. Johnson’s gentle advice that she must publish anonymously; her growing irritation about the impositions of her family, always requesting money she’s hard-pressed to supply; and her curiosity about the dark eroticism of the oil painting The Nightmare, as well as its artist. She enjoys male friendships, but with many examples of marriage’s negative effect on women weighing on her mind, Mary guards herself when it comes to romantic and sexual relationships. The depth of her emotions, once they surface, catches her unaware.
The novel proceeds chronologically, focusing on key periods of Mary’s life and how her character transformed. Some of her exploits would be considered significant in any day and age, such as moving abroad to observe a new republic’s violent birth firsthand and directing her own solo trip through parts of remote Scandinavia. Mary’s time in France is especially dangerous given her nationality. Augmenting the stress and unease are the fraught personal circumstances in which Mary finds herself.
Mastro’s writing is skillful and precise, creating descriptions of settings and characters that linger. She has an eye for atmospheric details: “Everyone’s clothes felt damp; even the pages of their books had gone limp,” she writes of a hot, rainy summer day in Bristol. Nearly all the characters are historically documented; if you’re familiar with the period, you may figure out which one(s) are fictional. All is explained in an author’s note. This is a well-researched, admirable fictional portrait that will leave you amazed at the daring and vigorous way Mary moved through her world.
Solitary Walker was published by Black Rose Writing in February (reviewed from an ARC copy).
Tuesday, March 25, 2025
Wednesday, March 19, 2025
The Long and Winding Road, an essay by Lorraine Norwood, author of The Solitary Sparrow
Continuing with the Small Press Month focus, I'm pleased to welcome Lorraine Norwood to Reading the Past with an essay about her long journey to publishing her debut novel. What do you do when you've chosen a compelling subject and have developed your fiction writing craft but find it impossible to break into the trend-focused market of traditional publication? Please read on, and please check out Lorraine's website for more information on her medieval historical fiction series, The Margaret Chronicles.
The Long and Winding Road
I published my debut book in 2024 after years of writing. I submitted hundreds of queries, attended conferences, was accepted by an agent, submitted to the Big 5, got turned down, submitted to smaller houses, got accepted by a small publisher but said "no" because the contract was lousy, suffered the death of my biggest fan— my mother, got Covid and cancer, was released by my agent, pivoted to a reputable hybrid publisher—and then got accepted. Hurray! It only took me 38 years.
It was a long and winding road. Hard, with very deep potholes.
Why, you might ask, did you not shove the book in a drawer and forget writing? Well, I’ve had lots of jobs in my life in order to pay the electric bill but the job I do best is writing. And it’s the one that gives me the most joy. I didn’t give up because I couldn’t NOT do it. Even though it didn’t pay the electric bill.
Since the first day my main character jumped into my head, I’ve seen a huge shift in the gatekeepers, a shift that has made it difficult for newbies to break into the traditional world of publishing.
Fourteen years ago I attended the HNS conference (my first) in San Diego and heard a group of editors and agents describe the chaotic changes in the traditional publishing world as the “new Wild Wild West.” I couldn’t be bothered with what the cowboys in New York City were doing. I had a book to get out. I had been working on it for years. All I had to do was get an agent at the conference, submit to the big boys, and voila! it was going to be a hit. Historical fiction readers were going to love it. I would be wined and dined, accompanied on book tours by my marketing agent, and get carpal tunnel syndrome from signing so many books.
Well, why NOT me? I did the work. Sat my butt in the chair. Worked on the craft. Got an agent. I rewrote sections of my manuscript for my agent, changed plotlines for prospective editors, and deleted scenes for editors who wanted the book sanitized. The negative responses went like this:
• The writing is top-notch, but nobody reads historical fiction anymore.
• It’s great writing, but it’s not saleable.
• Loved your characters, but we’re concerned about getting a return on our investment.
I did all the things you’re supposed to do and still NADA. After five years of trying, my agent, bless her heart, apologized and let me go.
That was the lowest, deepest pothole.
Jump to 2023. Traditional publishing was still not home on the range. If anything it was wilder than anybody predicted. Where were the chummy editor/writer consultations? Where were the book tours? Where were the marketing teams? Where were the new authors? Why were the big boys putting out the same people over and over again? And how, in all this chaos, with 2.2 million (and some say 3 million) books published yearly (according to UNESCO), can an author ever hope to climb to the top of the heap?
The truth is, you can’t. To think otherwise is delusional. At least that’s what a book coach and influencer told me during a Zoom call attended by hundreds of writers from across the globe. “You are delusional,” she said to me. Well, maybe she didn’t actually call ME delusional, just my thinking. Same thing. It hurt my feelings. But I realize now she was right. Except, maybe I wasn’t so much delusional as outdated and naive. I was waiting for others to take charge of my destiny, instead of me.
My book is NOT: historical fantasy, speculative historical fiction, historical crime, a retelling of Greek myths or historical romantasy. It’s not anything that the publishing powerful say they want.
My book is the story of one girl’s dogged pursuit to be the first female physician in England specializing in the care of women. The book is heavy on common people and light on the nobility. There aren’t any Tudors for another 200 years. The book is bloody, realistic, and gruesome in places. In fact, Goodreads contains this content warning: Abortion, miscarriage, death, misogyny, racial discrimination, gruesome medical procedures, and this review, “While I loved the grittiness of the story, a few scenes were a bit too crude for my reading preferences.”
Well, as the man says, “The past is a foreign country. They do things differently there.” Like die from childbed fever.
I now had a choice. I could spend more years of my life querying for an agent, querying the major and minor publishers, and waiting . . . and waiting or . . .
I was now 73 years old. I didn’t have time to wait.
I took an intense course on self-publishing. Self-publishing, no longer the red-headed stepchild of the author’s world, has gotten easier and more user friendly. But I decided my time could be spent more wisely by writing while I paid others to produce the book. After a lot of research and consultation with writer friends, I pivoted to hybrid publishing. One year later my book was born and out in the world.
At the recent History Quill 2025 virtual conference, panelists agreed that today traditional and indie publishing must go beyond mere writing and printing a book; multiple formats are increasingly important along with newsletters, blogs, email lists, social branding and authority on a subject.
And you thought all you had to do was write. Well, not anymore.
So, I’ll leave you with a few thoughts about the long and winding road.
There are many paths to publishing today. That’s the good news. You can send your work to agents or to small presses that don’t require an agent. You can send your work to hybrid presses or you can self-publish.
Do you have five years? Do you want to put it out there and get rejected or languish in a slush pile? Or do you want to see it out in the world in a year or possibly less?
For those of us who are "of a certain age," there is no question. We can’t wait. The finished book—that is, the book that has been through beta readers, a developmental editor, a proofreader, a cover artist, and typographer—needs to be born as quickly as possible.
If you really want to do it, don’t wait. You’ll wait yourself into the grave. Morbid? Yes. But true. Sh*t happens. If you wait, it’s going to happen anyway. Don’t wait.
Lorraine worked as a journalist in print and television for over 20 years before living the dream at the University of York in York, UK, where she earned a master’s degree in medieval archaeology. She has participated in excavations in York and at other sites in England, including a leper hospital.
She is a member of the Women’s Fiction Writers Association and the Historical Novel Society. She is happy that at long last, after two marriages, two children, twelve jobs, three college degrees, and twenty-three moves, she has a room of her own in which to write.
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The Long and Winding Road
Lorraine Norwood
It was a long and winding road. Hard, with very deep potholes.
Why, you might ask, did you not shove the book in a drawer and forget writing? Well, I’ve had lots of jobs in my life in order to pay the electric bill but the job I do best is writing. And it’s the one that gives me the most joy. I didn’t give up because I couldn’t NOT do it. Even though it didn’t pay the electric bill.
Since the first day my main character jumped into my head, I’ve seen a huge shift in the gatekeepers, a shift that has made it difficult for newbies to break into the traditional world of publishing.
Fourteen years ago I attended the HNS conference (my first) in San Diego and heard a group of editors and agents describe the chaotic changes in the traditional publishing world as the “new Wild Wild West.” I couldn’t be bothered with what the cowboys in New York City were doing. I had a book to get out. I had been working on it for years. All I had to do was get an agent at the conference, submit to the big boys, and voila! it was going to be a hit. Historical fiction readers were going to love it. I would be wined and dined, accompanied on book tours by my marketing agent, and get carpal tunnel syndrome from signing so many books.
Well, why NOT me? I did the work. Sat my butt in the chair. Worked on the craft. Got an agent. I rewrote sections of my manuscript for my agent, changed plotlines for prospective editors, and deleted scenes for editors who wanted the book sanitized. The negative responses went like this:
• The writing is top-notch, but nobody reads historical fiction anymore.
• It’s great writing, but it’s not saleable.
• Loved your characters, but we’re concerned about getting a return on our investment.
I did all the things you’re supposed to do and still NADA. After five years of trying, my agent, bless her heart, apologized and let me go.
That was the lowest, deepest pothole.
Jump to 2023. Traditional publishing was still not home on the range. If anything it was wilder than anybody predicted. Where were the chummy editor/writer consultations? Where were the book tours? Where were the marketing teams? Where were the new authors? Why were the big boys putting out the same people over and over again? And how, in all this chaos, with 2.2 million (and some say 3 million) books published yearly (according to UNESCO), can an author ever hope to climb to the top of the heap?
The truth is, you can’t. To think otherwise is delusional. At least that’s what a book coach and influencer told me during a Zoom call attended by hundreds of writers from across the globe. “You are delusional,” she said to me. Well, maybe she didn’t actually call ME delusional, just my thinking. Same thing. It hurt my feelings. But I realize now she was right. Except, maybe I wasn’t so much delusional as outdated and naive. I was waiting for others to take charge of my destiny, instead of me.
My book is NOT: historical fantasy, speculative historical fiction, historical crime, a retelling of Greek myths or historical romantasy. It’s not anything that the publishing powerful say they want.
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author Lorraine Norwood |
Well, as the man says, “The past is a foreign country. They do things differently there.” Like die from childbed fever.
I now had a choice. I could spend more years of my life querying for an agent, querying the major and minor publishers, and waiting . . . and waiting or . . .
I was now 73 years old. I didn’t have time to wait.
I took an intense course on self-publishing. Self-publishing, no longer the red-headed stepchild of the author’s world, has gotten easier and more user friendly. But I decided my time could be spent more wisely by writing while I paid others to produce the book. After a lot of research and consultation with writer friends, I pivoted to hybrid publishing. One year later my book was born and out in the world.
At the recent History Quill 2025 virtual conference, panelists agreed that today traditional and indie publishing must go beyond mere writing and printing a book; multiple formats are increasingly important along with newsletters, blogs, email lists, social branding and authority on a subject.
And you thought all you had to do was write. Well, not anymore.
So, I’ll leave you with a few thoughts about the long and winding road.
There are many paths to publishing today. That’s the good news. You can send your work to agents or to small presses that don’t require an agent. You can send your work to hybrid presses or you can self-publish.
Do you have five years? Do you want to put it out there and get rejected or languish in a slush pile? Or do you want to see it out in the world in a year or possibly less?
For those of us who are "of a certain age," there is no question. We can’t wait. The finished book—that is, the book that has been through beta readers, a developmental editor, a proofreader, a cover artist, and typographer—needs to be born as quickly as possible.
If you really want to do it, don’t wait. You’ll wait yourself into the grave. Morbid? Yes. But true. Sh*t happens. If you wait, it’s going to happen anyway. Don’t wait.
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Lorraine Norwood is a North Carolina native living in the Blue Ridge Mountains with her 14-year-old yellow Lab who thinks food is more interesting than writing. Lorraine is working on The Margaret Chronicles, an historical fiction series set in 14th century England and France. The first of the series, The Solitary Sparrow, was published in 2024. She is hard at work on the sequel, A Pelican in the Wilderness.
Lorraine worked as a journalist in print and television for over 20 years before living the dream at the University of York in York, UK, where she earned a master’s degree in medieval archaeology. She has participated in excavations in York and at other sites in England, including a leper hospital.
She is a member of the Women’s Fiction Writers Association and the Historical Novel Society. She is happy that at long last, after two marriages, two children, twelve jobs, three college degrees, and twenty-three moves, she has a room of her own in which to write.
Thursday, March 13, 2025
The need for speed: Emma Donoghue's The Paris Express imagines the lead-up to a historic train disaster
On the morning of October 22, 1895, the Paris Express leaves the town of Granville in Normandy for its seven-hour, ten-minute trip to the capital. Unbeknownst to its many passengers, the train is hurtling toward a crashing halt. Donoghue (Learned by Heart, 2023) superbly portrays the lead-up to the Montparnasse derailment, a disaster memorialized in astounding photographs, as experienced by travelers of diverse nationalities and social classes.
Among them are a mixed-race American painter aspiring to greater achievements, an Algerian coffee-seller, a young boy bravely journeying alone, a female physiology student who observes classic signs of disease in a teenage girl in her car, and married workmen who enjoy a unique partnership. Quietly, an anarchist on board weighs the right moment to strike.
Always balancing safety with keeping on schedule, crewmen feel pressured to make up any lost time. The pacing ramps up further midway through, the atmosphere tense.
Donoghue’s particular forte lies in showing how confined circumstances shape interactions. Her characterization is a marvel as she dexterously yet efficiently illustrates people’s outward appearances and innermost desires. In her hands, the novel’s long-ago setting becomes an exciting place buzzing with fresh life and technological ideas on the cusp of a new century.
Among them are a mixed-race American painter aspiring to greater achievements, an Algerian coffee-seller, a young boy bravely journeying alone, a female physiology student who observes classic signs of disease in a teenage girl in her car, and married workmen who enjoy a unique partnership. Quietly, an anarchist on board weighs the right moment to strike.
Always balancing safety with keeping on schedule, crewmen feel pressured to make up any lost time. The pacing ramps up further midway through, the atmosphere tense.
Donoghue’s particular forte lies in showing how confined circumstances shape interactions. Her characterization is a marvel as she dexterously yet efficiently illustrates people’s outward appearances and innermost desires. In her hands, the novel’s long-ago setting becomes an exciting place buzzing with fresh life and technological ideas on the cusp of a new century.
The Paris Express will be published by Summit Books, an imprint of Simon & Schuster, next Tuesday, March 18th; I wrote this draft review for Booklist's February issue.
I won't link to articles about the notorious derailment since There Be Spoilers for this particular novel, but you can google it if you so choose!
Monday, March 10, 2025
Our multicultural family history, a guest post by Alix Christie, author of “The Shining Mountains”
I'm very happy to have Alix Christie here on the blog with her essay about the family history behind her latest book, a family saga set in the Rocky Mountain West. Her debut, Gutenberg's Apprentice, was one of my favorite novels of 2014, and her second, The Shining Mountains, was just released in paperback by the High Road Books of the University of New Mexico Press. For additional information, please visit her website.
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Our Multicultural Family History
Our Multicultural Family History
Alix Christie
From an early age I was fascinated by the stories my Canadian grandmother told of her Scottish forbears in the Pacific Northwest, particularly one 19th century fur trader, Archibald McDonald, who married an alleged “princess” of the Chinook tribe. Decades later I would understand how offensive this fantasy depiction of Native wives of white men could be, and how common it unfortunately was. Yet as a child I was enraptured enough to draw a detailed family tree, showing that Archibald had indeed married Raven, a daughter of Chief Comcomly of the Chinook tribe. There the matter would have rested, if my younger brother, a historian and professor of literature, hadn’t turned up one day a decade ago with a boxful of books. He’d just written a scholarly paper on another distant relative, Duncan McDonald, and was gifting me his research. “For your next novel,” he said.
A quick count of the “Cast of Characters” of the book that eventually resulted adds up to more than fifty names. They include those Scots Highlanders, French missionaries, British bosses, American trappers, Norwegian, German and English immigrants, and Native Americans from five different tribes across the Rocky Mountain West. Though my research began with that one man — Duncan McDonald, son of our Scots great-great-great-uncle Angus and his Nez Perce wife Catherine—the story I discovered reached back several generations and across a vast expanse of the West, from the Rocky Mountains to the Pacific Ocean. It all came together when I flew to Montana to meet my many cousins on the Flathead Reservation, all enrolled tribal members descended from Angus and Catherine.
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Angus McDonald, 1860s, at the new international boundary between the U.S. and Canada |
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Catherine McDonald (Kitalah—Eagle Rising Up, Nez Perce), studio portrait, 1860s Montana |
Growing up in California public schools I had not the slightest idea of the deep pre-American history of our land. The story we were taught was one of pilgrims and triumph; the mechanics of “Manifest Destiny” and westward colonial expansion were not so much glossed over as ignored. Meeting for the first time Native Americans with whom I shared some drops of Scottish blood was therefore an extraordinary introduction to their history, both painful and proud. The five years I spent learning about their lives has been one of the richest experiences of my life. The Montana McDonalds welcomed me, offering advice and support; only with their generous help and a long and careful consultation with tribal authorities, was I able to breathe life into their family story as a novel.
The Shining Mountains recounts the life and times of this mixed-race family—half Scots Highlander, half Nez Perce, Mohawk and French—who were prominent in the last years of the fur trade between 1840 and 1860 in Washington, Oregon, Idaho and Montana. Angus McDonald was the last Chief Trader for the Hudson’s Bay Company in the vast chunk of territory that would become the northwestern United States. But it wasn’t his prominence that most amazed me. What struck me with even greater force was how incredibly multicultural was the mid-19th century world within which he and his family moved. We Americans have traditionally called our country a “melting pot” but on its western edge it was less melted than bubbling with many diverse peoples, all intermarrying and hunting and farming and trading together, Norwegian and Salish and Scottish and Yakama, French and Russian and yes—American. It was a Babel as well: many Native tribes communicated with one another through sign language, while the traders who bought furs from them used a pidgin they called “Chinook-wawa”.
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Two of Angus and Catherine's children, Angus P. and Maggie McDonald, in full Scottish regalia, 1870s Montana |
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Angus and Catherine's son Duncan McDonald, with his wife Louise “Quil-see” Shumtah (Salish), in Native dress with American flag, 1870s Montana |
This novel is about the love between two people of radically different backgrounds, yet sharing, paradoxically, a common culture of hunting and tight-knit family clans: Highlanders, too, were considered “savages” by the English who colonized Scotland. In North America families like theirs were put under incredible stress by the waves of Anglo migration that displaced Native people and forced them onto reservations. Yet against the odds they survived, to maintain their cultures and deep connection to their homelands. The “old Scotsman,” ancestor of many tribal members on the Flathead Reservation, remains a great source of pride. I was deeply moved when his great-grandson, the late Joe McDonald, the founder of Salish Kootenai College, and a great supporter of this project, described the book I wrote about Angus’ and Catherine’s life as “brilliant and invaluable.”
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The author with the late Dr. Joe McDonald, Angus & Catherine’s great-grandson, at the family cemetery at Post Creek, Montana (2016) |
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The Shining Mountains (High Road Books/University of New Mexico Press) appeared in paperback in early March 2025. Also in e-book, audiobook and hardback wherever books are sold.
Thursday, March 06, 2025
Lauren Willig's The Girl from Greenwich Street looks behind the history of America's first recorded murder trial
On the evening of December 22, 1799, Elma Sands, a young woman of illegitimate birth, donned her best calico gown and left her cousin Caty’s boardinghouse on New York City’s Greenwich Street, planning to elope with her wealthy intended. Twelve days later, her body was found in a well, and her purported fiancé, Levi Weeks, was put on trial.
For those new to this real-life incident, a noted murder case from early America, Lauren Willig’s latest book reads as an edge-of-your-seat crime novel, with sharp, panoramic characterizations and twists seemingly too fantastic to be true. For others familiar with the history, it resounds as a well-thought-out dramatization, capped by a long, satisfying author’s note.
The evidence against Levi is circumstantial, so the prosecution, led by assistant attorney general Cadwallader Colden, has an uphill battle. Already smarting from a recent loss, Colden knows his professional reputation hinges on success.
And on the defense team are Brockholst Livingston, Aaron Burr, and Alexander Hamilton, an unlikely alliance of men with past entanglements, future political aspirations, and conflicting approaches. The atmosphere is tight with suspense as it becomes clear only Alexander seeks the truth as well as justice for Elma. Can he possibly win?
Guided by primary sources and careful analysis, Willig (who holds a law degree herself) brilliantly steers through events with Elma at the center, looking back to her position as a poor relation in her Quaker family, her relationships with cousins Hope and Caty, and Caty’s complicated role as major breadwinner in her marriage, which irritates her husband, Elias.
The story has impressive stage-dressing full of details on household life and customs. Alexander, while a bit naïve and prone to verbosity, has a quick legal mind, and watching him and Aaron each try to out-maneuver the other makes for riveting fiction.
Lauren Willig's The Girl from Greenwich Street was published this week by William Morrow/ HarperCollins. What a story! I'd known nothing about the trial before reading the book, and if the same's true for you, please avoid googling the history in advance. This is a must-read for anyone who loves courtroom dramas and early American history, as well as Hamilton fans.
For those new to this real-life incident, a noted murder case from early America, Lauren Willig’s latest book reads as an edge-of-your-seat crime novel, with sharp, panoramic characterizations and twists seemingly too fantastic to be true. For others familiar with the history, it resounds as a well-thought-out dramatization, capped by a long, satisfying author’s note.
The evidence against Levi is circumstantial, so the prosecution, led by assistant attorney general Cadwallader Colden, has an uphill battle. Already smarting from a recent loss, Colden knows his professional reputation hinges on success.
And on the defense team are Brockholst Livingston, Aaron Burr, and Alexander Hamilton, an unlikely alliance of men with past entanglements, future political aspirations, and conflicting approaches. The atmosphere is tight with suspense as it becomes clear only Alexander seeks the truth as well as justice for Elma. Can he possibly win?
Guided by primary sources and careful analysis, Willig (who holds a law degree herself) brilliantly steers through events with Elma at the center, looking back to her position as a poor relation in her Quaker family, her relationships with cousins Hope and Caty, and Caty’s complicated role as major breadwinner in her marriage, which irritates her husband, Elias.
The story has impressive stage-dressing full of details on household life and customs. Alexander, while a bit naïve and prone to verbosity, has a quick legal mind, and watching him and Aaron each try to out-maneuver the other makes for riveting fiction.
Lauren Willig's The Girl from Greenwich Street was published this week by William Morrow/ HarperCollins. What a story! I'd known nothing about the trial before reading the book, and if the same's true for you, please avoid googling the history in advance. This is a must-read for anyone who loves courtroom dramas and early American history, as well as Hamilton fans.
Monday, March 03, 2025
Resistant Women: Imagining Voices Inside a Nineteenth-Century Asylum, an essay by Stephanie Carpenter, author of Moral Treatment
Thanks to author Stephanie Carpenter for contributing a post about crafting characters within the setting for her debut novel. Her essay makes for a good start to both Women's History Month as well as Small Press Month this March (and look for more small press-focused posts in the coming weeks). Moral Treatment was published by Central Michigan University Press on February 25.
My novel Moral Treatment was inspired by the former Northern Michigan Asylum, a psychiatric hospital that operated from 1885-1988 in my hometown of Traverse City. When I was a kid, the hospital’s huge, Victorian buildings were vacant and untended. What little I knew about the place came from relatives who’d worked there—and from my own impressions, formed while roaming the grounds and peeking through dusty windows. I think it was inevitable that I would someday write fiction about this setting.
I didn’t know what stories would suggest themselves when I began researching the hospital’s history, but I quickly became fascinated by the ideologies associated with its crumbling architecture. The moral treatment of the nineteenth century aimed to provide humane care to people experiencing mental illnesses. Its chief therapeutic tools were wholesome food, sanitary surroundings, access to medical care, and exposure to positive influences. Few drugs were in use in this era, and the punitive tools employed by previous generations of doctors were abandoned. But this compassionate approach yielded few "cures," and across the U.S., hospitals like the Northern Michigan Asylum expanded steadily. I wondered about the experiences of doctors and patients inside those walls.
Moral Treatment imagines life in a fictional hospital in 1889, five years after its founding. The novel alternates between the perspectives of the hospital’s medical superintendent—referred to throughout as “the doctor,” to emphasize that his identity is inseparable from his work—and seventeen-year-old Amy Underwood, a newly-admitted patient diagnosed with “pubescent insanity.” Amy’s reckless behaviors led her parents to commit her, and I wanted to depict her experience as both deeply distressing and, in some ways, liberating: at the hospital, she’s exempt from societal expectations for young women. But how could she grow in a space where she’s constantly monitored and diagnosed? Drawing from research, I developed the women characters around Amy as points of resistance to repressive forces both inside and outside the hospital.
One of the most outspoken of these characters is Mrs. Lovelace, a deeply-devout patient known as “the Walking Skeleton of Charlevoix,” who I based on the “fasting girls” of this period. The wife of a minister, Mrs. Lovelace is disgusted by her husband’s superficial piety. She presents herself as an exemplar of true Christianity, sustained on faith alone; her emaciation and fervent preaching challenged her husband, leading to her institutionalization. The doctors see Mrs. Lovelace as a case of religious delusion and anorexia nervosa; she sees them as charlatans, leading witless sheep. Mrs. Lovelace’s righteous defiance impresses Amy deeply.
Another vocal challenger of the hospital’s authority is Bertha Chapman of the Women’s Christian Temperance Union. Visiting Amy’s ward, Miss Chapman is troubled to learn that not all patients—Amy included—have letter-writing “privileges.” The policy is presented as protective, but Miss Chapman recognizes it as repressive, arguing that the women all deserve voices. Mocked and maligned, temperance reformers fought to raise awareness of the impacts of rampant alcohol abuse, focusing on the suffering of women and children. The WCTU also took progressive stands on a variety of other issues, and it made sense to me that Miss Chapman would advocate for institutionalized women. Amy recognizes Miss Chapman—an unmarried woman, uncowed by the doctors, working for social reforms—as an iconoclast and ally.
Amy’s closest friend, Letitia Olsen, is a young, chronic patient who embodies women’s vulnerability and persistence. She’s been abused at other hospitals; her scars, including from a hysterectomy, illustrate gendered biases about mental health. A ward of the state, she’s now attracted the attention of the hospital’s most “modern” doctor, who sees her as a good subject for an experimental surgery. But charismatic Letitia thwarts the doctors’ attempts to quell her, constantly calling their motives into question and seeding doubts among the other women. Letitia always authors her own story, but Amy worries that her friend’s story-telling sometimes veers into self-delusion; Letitia’s unprotected situation pushes Amy to plan for both of their futures.
Finally, I crafted the doctor’s wife, Diana, as a bridge between her husband’s clinical perspective and the patients’ lived experiences. Diana met her husband as his patient at a health resort; though her “nervous complaints” make her seem like a Victorian stereotype, her arc challenges ideas about women’s frailty and docility. Having lived on-site at asylums throughout her marriage, Diana makes meaningful roles for herself: socializing with the patients, planning entertainments, and documenting the hospital through photography. Though her husband still sees her as his patient, Diana is increasingly concerned about his health; at fifty-one to his sixty-five years old, she recognizes that his commitment to the hospital is unsustainable. Her perceptiveness extends to the patients. By sharing her interest in photography, Diana expands Amy’s narrow view of the world.
Moral Treatment doesn’t attempt to tell the stories of actual people who lived, loved, and suffered at the Northern Michigan Asylum or hospitals like it. Those stories aren’t mine to tell. Instead, I hope that my fictional characters, rooted in historical research, help to animate the institutions that still linger around us—and I hope my novel illustrates that power may be complex, but it is never absolute.
Stephanie Carpenter’s debut novel, Moral Treatment, is the inaugural winner of the Summit Series Prize from Central Michigan University Press. Her collection of stories, Missing Persons, won the 2017 Press 53 Award for Short Fiction. A native of northern Michigan, Stephanie holds degrees from Williams College, Syracuse University, and the University of Missouri. She is Assistant Professor of Creative Writing at Michigan Tech University. Learn more at stephanie-carpenter.com.
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Resistant Women: Imagining Voices Inside a Nineteenth-Century Asylum
By Stephanie Carpenter
My novel Moral Treatment was inspired by the former Northern Michigan Asylum, a psychiatric hospital that operated from 1885-1988 in my hometown of Traverse City. When I was a kid, the hospital’s huge, Victorian buildings were vacant and untended. What little I knew about the place came from relatives who’d worked there—and from my own impressions, formed while roaming the grounds and peeking through dusty windows. I think it was inevitable that I would someday write fiction about this setting.
I didn’t know what stories would suggest themselves when I began researching the hospital’s history, but I quickly became fascinated by the ideologies associated with its crumbling architecture. The moral treatment of the nineteenth century aimed to provide humane care to people experiencing mental illnesses. Its chief therapeutic tools were wholesome food, sanitary surroundings, access to medical care, and exposure to positive influences. Few drugs were in use in this era, and the punitive tools employed by previous generations of doctors were abandoned. But this compassionate approach yielded few "cures," and across the U.S., hospitals like the Northern Michigan Asylum expanded steadily. I wondered about the experiences of doctors and patients inside those walls.
Moral Treatment imagines life in a fictional hospital in 1889, five years after its founding. The novel alternates between the perspectives of the hospital’s medical superintendent—referred to throughout as “the doctor,” to emphasize that his identity is inseparable from his work—and seventeen-year-old Amy Underwood, a newly-admitted patient diagnosed with “pubescent insanity.” Amy’s reckless behaviors led her parents to commit her, and I wanted to depict her experience as both deeply distressing and, in some ways, liberating: at the hospital, she’s exempt from societal expectations for young women. But how could she grow in a space where she’s constantly monitored and diagnosed? Drawing from research, I developed the women characters around Amy as points of resistance to repressive forces both inside and outside the hospital.
One of the most outspoken of these characters is Mrs. Lovelace, a deeply-devout patient known as “the Walking Skeleton of Charlevoix,” who I based on the “fasting girls” of this period. The wife of a minister, Mrs. Lovelace is disgusted by her husband’s superficial piety. She presents herself as an exemplar of true Christianity, sustained on faith alone; her emaciation and fervent preaching challenged her husband, leading to her institutionalization. The doctors see Mrs. Lovelace as a case of religious delusion and anorexia nervosa; she sees them as charlatans, leading witless sheep. Mrs. Lovelace’s righteous defiance impresses Amy deeply.
Another vocal challenger of the hospital’s authority is Bertha Chapman of the Women’s Christian Temperance Union. Visiting Amy’s ward, Miss Chapman is troubled to learn that not all patients—Amy included—have letter-writing “privileges.” The policy is presented as protective, but Miss Chapman recognizes it as repressive, arguing that the women all deserve voices. Mocked and maligned, temperance reformers fought to raise awareness of the impacts of rampant alcohol abuse, focusing on the suffering of women and children. The WCTU also took progressive stands on a variety of other issues, and it made sense to me that Miss Chapman would advocate for institutionalized women. Amy recognizes Miss Chapman—an unmarried woman, uncowed by the doctors, working for social reforms—as an iconoclast and ally.
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author Stephanie Carpenter (credit: Adam Johnson, brockit inc.) |
Finally, I crafted the doctor’s wife, Diana, as a bridge between her husband’s clinical perspective and the patients’ lived experiences. Diana met her husband as his patient at a health resort; though her “nervous complaints” make her seem like a Victorian stereotype, her arc challenges ideas about women’s frailty and docility. Having lived on-site at asylums throughout her marriage, Diana makes meaningful roles for herself: socializing with the patients, planning entertainments, and documenting the hospital through photography. Though her husband still sees her as his patient, Diana is increasingly concerned about his health; at fifty-one to his sixty-five years old, she recognizes that his commitment to the hospital is unsustainable. Her perceptiveness extends to the patients. By sharing her interest in photography, Diana expands Amy’s narrow view of the world.
Moral Treatment doesn’t attempt to tell the stories of actual people who lived, loved, and suffered at the Northern Michigan Asylum or hospitals like it. Those stories aren’t mine to tell. Instead, I hope that my fictional characters, rooted in historical research, help to animate the institutions that still linger around us—and I hope my novel illustrates that power may be complex, but it is never absolute.
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Stephanie Carpenter’s debut novel, Moral Treatment, is the inaugural winner of the Summit Series Prize from Central Michigan University Press. Her collection of stories, Missing Persons, won the 2017 Press 53 Award for Short Fiction. A native of northern Michigan, Stephanie holds degrees from Williams College, Syracuse University, and the University of Missouri. She is Assistant Professor of Creative Writing at Michigan Tech University. Learn more at stephanie-carpenter.com.
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Tuesday, February 25, 2025
Which promotional blurbs matter the most to historical fiction readers?
The literary world has been having a long-overdue conversation about the practice of blurbing, that is, writers providing promotional endorsements for each other’s books. This was spurred by Sean Manning, publisher at Simon & Schuster’s imprint of the same name, who wrote an essay for Publishers Weekly explaining why they’d no longer expect their writers to obtain blurbs. “Trying to get blurbs is not a good use of anyone’s time,” he writes, among many other good points. “Instead, authors who are soliciting them could be writing their next book… worse, this kind of favor trading creates an incestuous and unmeritocratic literary ecosystem that often rewards connections over talent.”
Others in the industry have shared their own takes:
From NPR Books' newsletter: Hey, would you mind blurbing my book?
From Elisabeth Egan in the New York Times: What are book blurbs, and how much do they matter in publishing? (gift article)
Others in the industry have shared their own takes:
From NPR Books' newsletter: Hey, would you mind blurbing my book?
From Elisabeth Egan in the New York Times: What are book blurbs, and how much do they matter in publishing? (gift article)
Publicist Kathleen Schmidt, from her Substack: Let's Talk About Blurbs... Again
Author Rebecca Makkai: Blurb No More - written before Sean Manning's essay came out.
Blurbs from peers can provide encouragement for authors, especially debuts, and contribute to a sense of belonging in the literary sphere. But since presumably the goal of all involved – publishers, authors, and agents – is to sell books, it should matter if readers find blurbs useful or not. And the consensus is that they don’t – or, at best, “we don’t know.”
As a book critic and avid reader, blurbs come across my desk and inbox all the time but usually don't, in themselves, encourage me to take a closer look. Blurbs are good at demonstrating their writers’ connections in the industry: fellow authors within the same category (like historical women’s fiction); authors who share the same publisher or literary agent; or writers and faculty from the same MFA program.
Some novels include a voluminous list of blurbs that go on for pages. Why so many? Nobody's going to read them all, and all I can think is how many total hours were spent on that exercise. It's not easy to provide a nice précis while extolling the book’s appeal in an original way. Just like reviewing, blurbing takes time and skill.
I know this personally, since I’ve been on the receiving end of blurb requests a handful of times. I was pleased to be asked and enjoyed the books but have decided to stick with reviewing. Also, several instances after I spent time reading a book and crafting a blurb, the author’s publisher decided it wasn’t valuable enough to use (the unspoken message is that I lack name recognition!). This wasn’t the author’s fault, but it was discouraging.
Blurbs' strongest asset is their ability to provide clues, in a readers’ advisory sense, about what type of book you'll be getting. This only works if readers recognize the names of the authors providing the quotes, and are familiar with what they write.
Some blurbs can be confusing if not outright detrimental, with regard to helping a book find its audience. I’ve seen works of commercial historical fiction arrive with blurbs by authors of literary short story anthologies – a big disconnect. I’ve also seen blurbs for historical novels written by professionals in unrelated fields who may have been personal friends. Best to skip soliciting those.
Here are specific instances when, as a reader and reviewer, blurbs have piqued my interest:
- Novels by new-to-me writers, especially those with small or indie presses, blurbed by well-known authors whose works I admire.
Some examples. I had recently seen the Publishers Marketplace deal for Esperanza Hope Snyder’s Orange Wine and made a mental note to watch for it, since it’s set in early 20th-century Colombia and had an intriguing plot. It appeared on NetGalley last week with a blurb from Margot Livesey, whose The Road from Belhaven I loved. I put in a request for it. For another: C. F. Dunn’s Wheel of Fortune has a cover endorsement from Elizabeth Chadwick, who calls it “the best Wars of the Roses novel I have ever read.” This doesn’t guarantee I’ll love either book, but were these blurbs effective? Yes.
- Novels in which the author’s moving to a new genre or subgenre and seeking to expand their audience. If the blurbers and blurbs don’t match this new direction, it sends a mixed message.
- Recommendations from representatives of historical societies, well-known academics, or others with a personal relationship with the novel’s subject. These are uncommon and totally not necessary for fictional works, but when done appropriately, they stand out. While this isn’t a blurb per se, the endorsement that Nedra Farwell Brown, great-granddaughter of the subject of Kathleen Grissom’s Crow Mary, provided for the book via her foreword is noteworthy. How do I know this? Because so many reviewers mentioned it in their reviews. I dare say her words carried even more weight because Grissom was writing outside her culture.
The absence of these or any other blurbs isn’t meaningful to me, however, and it’s the rare endorsement that would persuade me to read a book I didn't already want to read.
I would be interested in hearing from other readers about whether blurbs/endorsements encouraged you to pick up a book.
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Blurbs, blurbs, and more blurbs |
Blurbs from peers can provide encouragement for authors, especially debuts, and contribute to a sense of belonging in the literary sphere. But since presumably the goal of all involved – publishers, authors, and agents – is to sell books, it should matter if readers find blurbs useful or not. And the consensus is that they don’t – or, at best, “we don’t know.”
As a book critic and avid reader, blurbs come across my desk and inbox all the time but usually don't, in themselves, encourage me to take a closer look. Blurbs are good at demonstrating their writers’ connections in the industry: fellow authors within the same category (like historical women’s fiction); authors who share the same publisher or literary agent; or writers and faculty from the same MFA program.
Some novels include a voluminous list of blurbs that go on for pages. Why so many? Nobody's going to read them all, and all I can think is how many total hours were spent on that exercise. It's not easy to provide a nice précis while extolling the book’s appeal in an original way. Just like reviewing, blurbing takes time and skill.
I know this personally, since I’ve been on the receiving end of blurb requests a handful of times. I was pleased to be asked and enjoyed the books but have decided to stick with reviewing. Also, several instances after I spent time reading a book and crafting a blurb, the author’s publisher decided it wasn’t valuable enough to use (the unspoken message is that I lack name recognition!). This wasn’t the author’s fault, but it was discouraging.
Blurbs' strongest asset is their ability to provide clues, in a readers’ advisory sense, about what type of book you'll be getting. This only works if readers recognize the names of the authors providing the quotes, and are familiar with what they write.
Some blurbs can be confusing if not outright detrimental, with regard to helping a book find its audience. I’ve seen works of commercial historical fiction arrive with blurbs by authors of literary short story anthologies – a big disconnect. I’ve also seen blurbs for historical novels written by professionals in unrelated fields who may have been personal friends. Best to skip soliciting those.
Here are specific instances when, as a reader and reviewer, blurbs have piqued my interest:
- Novels by new-to-me writers, especially those with small or indie presses, blurbed by well-known authors whose works I admire.
Some examples. I had recently seen the Publishers Marketplace deal for Esperanza Hope Snyder’s Orange Wine and made a mental note to watch for it, since it’s set in early 20th-century Colombia and had an intriguing plot. It appeared on NetGalley last week with a blurb from Margot Livesey, whose The Road from Belhaven I loved. I put in a request for it. For another: C. F. Dunn’s Wheel of Fortune has a cover endorsement from Elizabeth Chadwick, who calls it “the best Wars of the Roses novel I have ever read.” This doesn’t guarantee I’ll love either book, but were these blurbs effective? Yes.
- When a major author in the genre praises any book. The late Hilary Mantel was known for her generosity towards other writers, as well as her discernment. If she praised a book, I paid attention. Her comments were always brilliantly phrased, too.
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The book cover, and a close-up. What do you think... is this blurb persuasive? |
- Novels in which the author’s moving to a new genre or subgenre and seeking to expand their audience. If the blurbers and blurbs don’t match this new direction, it sends a mixed message.
- Recommendations from representatives of historical societies, well-known academics, or others with a personal relationship with the novel’s subject. These are uncommon and totally not necessary for fictional works, but when done appropriately, they stand out. While this isn’t a blurb per se, the endorsement that Nedra Farwell Brown, great-granddaughter of the subject of Kathleen Grissom’s Crow Mary, provided for the book via her foreword is noteworthy. How do I know this? Because so many reviewers mentioned it in their reviews. I dare say her words carried even more weight because Grissom was writing outside her culture.
The absence of these or any other blurbs isn’t meaningful to me, however, and it’s the rare endorsement that would persuade me to read a book I didn't already want to read.
I would be interested in hearing from other readers about whether blurbs/endorsements encouraged you to pick up a book.
Friday, February 21, 2025
Competition and sisterhood in Elyse Durham's Maya & Natasha, set in the world of ballet in Cold War Russia
What do people owe a repressive government that originally nurtured them? Durham offers an attention-grabbing debut about the closeness and rivalry between twin sisters in Cold War Russia as they navigate their individual ambitions alongside the pressures of the Soviet state.
Orphaned as newborns during the Siege of Leningrad, thoughtful Maya and the more dynamic Natasha grow up with their fellow students at the Vaganova academy, undergoing rigorous training and hoping for a career with the prestigious Kirov Ballet. However, per a new Kremlin law, only one of them can join the company, which spurs intense competition and the first of several high-stakes plot twists.
The insider view of the dancer’s life is enthralling, and even non-balletomanes will be pulled along by the women’s stories, which include an international tour, love affairs, choreography, and acting. The omniscient perspective creates a truly cinematic experience as it swoops among the sisters and many fictional and historical characters, including filmmaker Sergei Bondarchuk and even Khrushchev, in this riveting novel about sisterhood and the purpose of art.
Elyse Durham's Maya & Natasha was published by Mariner this week; I wrote this review for the February issue of Booklist. I definitely recommend this one! I learned a lot about the technical aspects of ballet, and the author draws readers closely into the characters' specialized world.
Orphaned as newborns during the Siege of Leningrad, thoughtful Maya and the more dynamic Natasha grow up with their fellow students at the Vaganova academy, undergoing rigorous training and hoping for a career with the prestigious Kirov Ballet. However, per a new Kremlin law, only one of them can join the company, which spurs intense competition and the first of several high-stakes plot twists.
The insider view of the dancer’s life is enthralling, and even non-balletomanes will be pulled along by the women’s stories, which include an international tour, love affairs, choreography, and acting. The omniscient perspective creates a truly cinematic experience as it swoops among the sisters and many fictional and historical characters, including filmmaker Sergei Bondarchuk and even Khrushchev, in this riveting novel about sisterhood and the purpose of art.
Elyse Durham's Maya & Natasha was published by Mariner this week; I wrote this review for the February issue of Booklist. I definitely recommend this one! I learned a lot about the technical aspects of ballet, and the author draws readers closely into the characters' specialized world.
Monday, February 17, 2025
The Great Depression on the Farm, a guest post by Charlotte Whitney, author of A Tiny Piece of Blue
Today I'm welcoming author Charlotte Whitney, who has a guest essay about the historical background to her new novel, A Tiny Piece of Blue.
Many readers enjoy the familiarity of the dust storms of the Great Depression touchingly depicted by John Steinbeck’s Grapes of Wrath (1939) and more recently by Kristin Hannah in The Four Winds (2021). These are amazing books, and I encourage you to read them. However, because the devastating dust storms didn’t hit southern Michigan with the same ferocity of other plains states, readers tend to be less familiar with my settings. Nevertheless, Michigan was not immune from the vagaries of weather and economics during the depression. Droughts, along with plummeting dairy, beef, pork, and egg prices caused many farm foreclosures. Farmers found themselves homeless and unless they had family willing to take them in, they joined the minions setting out for a better life, often California-bound.
I grew up on a farm in Calhoun County, Michigan as did my parents, and both sets of grandparents. Before them were immigrants from England, Ireland, and Germany who all had dreams of a better life. Calhoun County encompasses Battle Creek, Marshall, Albion and some smaller towns and villages. But it was farmland when the immigrants settled, and all my grandparents and great-grandparents were indigent family farmers. My mother remembered the log cabin that was originally the family homestead, long since replaced not once, but subsequently by two houses on the same site. The family stories are rich with both fact and emotion. However, not all stories were passed down, particularly those of failure and heartbreak. No letters were kept, save the missives home from two great-great uncles who were Union soldiers in the Civil War. Nevertheless, when starting my research, I chose to start with those stories closest to my heart—those of my family.
When a child, my mother had a pet lamb that she loved. It was soft, cuddly and tagged along with her wherever she went. Ironically, my mother’s name was Mary. However, one year during the Depression my grandparents struggled to have enough to eat, and my mom’s precious lamb was slaughtered. From that day on my mother would eat anything that was on the table—some days squirrel, rabbit, or wild boar, but she NEVER ever ate lamb.
Charlotte Whitney’s next book, A Tiny Piece of Blue, will be released February 18, 2025. It can be pre-ordered here: https://charlottewhitney.com/pre-order
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The Great Depression on the Farm
Charlotte Whitney
At its best historical fiction is totally immersive. Readers become so involved in the story that they feel they are right there in the same room with the characters, mentally encouraging them to take a certain path or, conversely, discouraging flawed characters from decisions with disastrous consequences. My readers expect this from me, and I attempt to delight as well as educate readers regarding a particular period of history.
However, I mentioned the reader being in the same “room” with the characters. Many of the settings in my books are not rooms but a variety of farm locations. A section or chapter might take place in a barn, field, silo, chicken house, milk house, or hay loft--or a one-room country school, barn dance, or the midway of a county fair. All of these locations have been settings in one or another of my novels which are set in the rural farmland of south-central Michigan during the Great Depression.
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A Tiny Piece of Blue, February 2025 |
Many readers enjoy the familiarity of the dust storms of the Great Depression touchingly depicted by John Steinbeck’s Grapes of Wrath (1939) and more recently by Kristin Hannah in The Four Winds (2021). These are amazing books, and I encourage you to read them. However, because the devastating dust storms didn’t hit southern Michigan with the same ferocity of other plains states, readers tend to be less familiar with my settings. Nevertheless, Michigan was not immune from the vagaries of weather and economics during the depression. Droughts, along with plummeting dairy, beef, pork, and egg prices caused many farm foreclosures. Farmers found themselves homeless and unless they had family willing to take them in, they joined the minions setting out for a better life, often California-bound.
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My Childhood Family Farm with Red Barns |
I grew up on a farm in Calhoun County, Michigan as did my parents, and both sets of grandparents. Before them were immigrants from England, Ireland, and Germany who all had dreams of a better life. Calhoun County encompasses Battle Creek, Marshall, Albion and some smaller towns and villages. But it was farmland when the immigrants settled, and all my grandparents and great-grandparents were indigent family farmers. My mother remembered the log cabin that was originally the family homestead, long since replaced not once, but subsequently by two houses on the same site. The family stories are rich with both fact and emotion. However, not all stories were passed down, particularly those of failure and heartbreak. No letters were kept, save the missives home from two great-great uncles who were Union soldiers in the Civil War. Nevertheless, when starting my research, I chose to start with those stories closest to my heart—those of my family.
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My mother Mary Whitney with her sister and her pet lamb |
When a child, my mother had a pet lamb that she loved. It was soft, cuddly and tagged along with her wherever she went. Ironically, my mother’s name was Mary. However, one year during the Depression my grandparents struggled to have enough to eat, and my mom’s precious lamb was slaughtered. From that day on my mother would eat anything that was on the table—some days squirrel, rabbit, or wild boar, but she NEVER ever ate lamb.
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Photos of Calhoun County Fair in the 1930s (courtesy of the Calhoun County Agricultural and Industrial Society) |
A Tiny Piece of Blue contains several dramatic scenes from the 1935 Calhoun County Fair. Vernon passes by members of the Pottawatomi tribe selling quill baskets at the entrance to the fair and experiences a wave of regret he never purchased one for Edna. Similarly thirteen-year-old Silstice finds herself at the top of the Ferris Wheel and looks down to see her two younger brothers held hostage and struggling to pull free from their captors. Likewise Vernon observes families picnicking at Fair Lake, formerly named The Duck Pond. The places are authentic and make colorful, dramatic settings.
In one scene of A Tiny Piece of Blue Vernon surprises Silstice and her sister Alberta with a Saturday night barn dance. He mentions that barn dances only happen in June when haylofts are cleared out and before they are filled up again at hay-baling time, usually around the 4th of July. This, of course, is true for Calhoun County, Michigan. The hay season farther south would be earlier and farther north would be later.
I’ve heard from a great number of older Midwestern readers who comment on the “authentic” nature of my historical novels. I strive for that plus a superb story which keeps the reader turning pages, desperate to reach the end, yet never wanting the book to ever end. That paradox remains my goal.
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Charlotte Whitney’s next book, A Tiny Piece of Blue, will be released February 18, 2025. It can be pre-ordered here: https://charlottewhitney.com/pre-order
Wednesday, February 12, 2025
A tangled web of mysteries in Candace Robb's medieval-set A Snake in the Barley
Tom Merchet, brewer of some of the finest ale in York in 1377, has failed to return home for days, and his beloved wife, Bess, can’t hide her concern. Tom’s disappearance is out of character for the kindly taverner, but he had been acting perturbed for weeks beforehand. He spoke little about his life before his marriage, even to Bess herself, and she wasn’t one to pry.
A Snake in the Barley, 15th of Robb’s Owen Archer books, delves into the troubled history of this recurrent series figure, exploring where he came from and how it shaped him, especially now that it seems shady characters from his past have resurfaced.
Owen Archer—the captain of the City of York and spy for Joan of Kent, widow of King Edward’s eldest son—is determined to find what happened to his close friend. Owen’s first lead has him investigating the real identity of the “Widow Cobb,” a disabled woman living in a tenement that Tom had been seen entering. It’s unlikely Tom would have been unfaithful, but what was she to him? Owen also receives visits from two of the Duke of Lancaster’s men who traveled north to find two men who incited violence in London.
The atmosphere is tense and dark, the plot complicated and winding, with every solution opening up more mysteries. The loving relationship between Owen and wife Lucie, and the interactions among their children and friends, warms up the otherwise somber tone of this well-researched medieval crime novel, which offers vivid scenes across York and the nearby sanctuary town of Beverley. One caveat: readers who haven’t followed this series in order may feel like outsiders looking in on the many characters and their relationships, since some of the plot builds on backstory from earlier volumes.
Candace Robb's A Snake in the Barley appeared from Severn House in December (I reviewed it for the Historical Novels Review originally). The first in the Owen Archer series, The Apothecary Rose, was first published by St. Martin's Press in 1993, which is when I read it. Midway through the series, it moved over to a new publisher, Severn House, which republished all the earlier volumes with beautiful new covers in 2024. Having twice visited York, I highly recommend a trip there, in either contemporary or medieval times via this series (preferably both!).
A Snake in the Barley, 15th of Robb’s Owen Archer books, delves into the troubled history of this recurrent series figure, exploring where he came from and how it shaped him, especially now that it seems shady characters from his past have resurfaced.
Owen Archer—the captain of the City of York and spy for Joan of Kent, widow of King Edward’s eldest son—is determined to find what happened to his close friend. Owen’s first lead has him investigating the real identity of the “Widow Cobb,” a disabled woman living in a tenement that Tom had been seen entering. It’s unlikely Tom would have been unfaithful, but what was she to him? Owen also receives visits from two of the Duke of Lancaster’s men who traveled north to find two men who incited violence in London.
The atmosphere is tense and dark, the plot complicated and winding, with every solution opening up more mysteries. The loving relationship between Owen and wife Lucie, and the interactions among their children and friends, warms up the otherwise somber tone of this well-researched medieval crime novel, which offers vivid scenes across York and the nearby sanctuary town of Beverley. One caveat: readers who haven’t followed this series in order may feel like outsiders looking in on the many characters and their relationships, since some of the plot builds on backstory from earlier volumes.
Candace Robb's A Snake in the Barley appeared from Severn House in December (I reviewed it for the Historical Novels Review originally). The first in the Owen Archer series, The Apothecary Rose, was first published by St. Martin's Press in 1993, which is when I read it. Midway through the series, it moved over to a new publisher, Severn House, which republished all the earlier volumes with beautiful new covers in 2024. Having twice visited York, I highly recommend a trip there, in either contemporary or medieval times via this series (preferably both!).
Saturday, February 08, 2025
Takeaways from Day 1 of The History Quill's 2025 convention, covering the state of historical fiction today
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I spent yesterday at The History Quill’s 2025 virtual convention, which I first heard about on Instagram. It’s a writers’ conference for historical novelists and, although I don’t write fiction, the program was of great interest to me. Day 1 was all about the state of historical fiction in 2025: trends, marketing tips, career planning for authors amidst industry changes, and so forth. The day – it was a very long day – was planned well for attendees across various time zones, spanning from 5am to 8pm in US Central Time, and the sessions were mostly spaced at least an hour apart. This was incredibly helpful in preventing Zoom fatigue and allowing time for meals and breaks. The conference continues today and tomorrow with workshops on writing craft, and I didn’t sign up for those.
My day began at 7am with four British historical novelists (moderator Louise Hare, Louise Fein, Eleni Kyriacou, and Frances Quinn), who have at least three books out apiece, on maintaining a career in historical fiction. This was excellent, a very friendly, open conversation about the practicalities of writing historicals today, with the following points made and often agreed upon by panelists:
- Editors and agents agree that authors should write what they like, but not all ideas are saleable, so it’s good to have multiple concepts in mind.
- For your first published novel, make sure it’s in a style or period you want to stick with, because readers/editors will want “the same, but different” for future books.
- The panelists named writers whose work they especially admired: Sarah Waters, Kate Quinn, Kate Atkinson, and Kate Mosse. Even though they move between settings and styles, their books share commonalities, such as high writing quality (Atkinson) and themes of female agency and friendship (Quinn), for example. Sarah Waters' Fingersmith was praised for having the best plot twist ever.
- Historical novels are getting shorter. Where 120K words was possible once, editors now expect closer to 100K.
- Writing courses are good for establishing discipline and forming a community, but after a point, having a reliable writing group to bounce problems/ideas off of is more helpful.
At 9am, one US literary agent, one UK agent, and a UK-based commissioning editor spoke about the HF book market in 2025. Jane Chun (Transatlantic Agency), Olivia Davies (United Agents), and Craig Lye (Canelo) had a wide-ranging discussion about trending subgenres, reader preferences, and the like. Some takeaways:
- Currently popular are genre-blends (R. F. Kuang’s Babel), since they have a crossover readership; this includes historical mysteries, thrillers, and horror. Over a third of current NYT bestsellers are historicals (Jane Chun). This was echoed by Olivia Davies, who spoke about the growth of historical horror and speculative HF, citing Kaliane Bradley’s The Ministry of Time, which “uses the past to open up the present.” Craig Lye mentioned the 80th anniversary of the end of WWII in 2025 and that other anniversary tie-ins lead to increased interest in the public psyche. He saw an interest in historical crime featuring famous figures, Greek myth retellings (ongoing), and Arctic exploration.
- Since the WWII market is saturated, we need new perspectives and less familiar settings (Chun). I think readers would agree with this too.
- On the political climate’s impact on the genre: readers are looking for escapism, but also novels that engage with political unrest in historical times (Davies); Chun agreed, saying children’s lit was more responsive to current events but was also subject to calls for banning. Lye said that politically focused novels needed to be backed by strong research and insight. One recent acquisition about the Ukraine war did well, but direct tie-ins to today’s politics can be a gamble.
- Multiple-timeline novels require extra work by their authors and need justification for why this format is needed (Chun). She receives many manuscripts of this type, some of which have so many characters and timelines that they’re hard to follow. I found this interesting since I often hear that adding a contemporary narrative to a historical novel can increase its audience. However, readers do notice if the parallel storylines aren’t well integrated and don’t carry equal weight, so Chun’s remarks are apt.
- Interest in unheard voices and underrepresented viewpoints continues to be strong. There was a (very predictable) question in the chat relating to cultural appropriation. Every time this question comes up in a panel discussion, which is a lot, the answer is the same, but the panelists made their points well. The consensus: authors have the freedom to write what they want, but make sure the research is sound, and ask themselves if they’re the right people to be telling the story.
- Ferdia Lennon’s Glorious Exploits, set during the Peloponnesian War but told in contemporary Irish vernacular, was mentioned both in this session (by Davies) and another one as noteworthy due to its strong voice and how well the mashup worked.
For the keynote session at noon, Amy Durant (co-founder and editorial director at Sapere Books), Vaseem Khan (historical crime novelist and Chair, Crime Writers’ Association), and Orna Ross (novelist and founder, Alliance of Independent Authors) spoke about the current state and future of historical fiction. Another valuable session. Some highlights:
- The increasing importance of publishing in multiple formats simultaneously (Durant), the growth of audiobooks, especially among indie authors (Ross), and comments on how the experience of reading dictates the format chosen; Khan explained how listening to Wolf Hall on audio was a completely different experience than reading the text. Ross spoke about the growth of deluxe hardback editions, even if readers had previously purchased a book in a different format.
- Author newsletters are important since while social media platforms change, email isn’t going away. It’s critical not to overpromote on social media.
- Specific niches are where authors are finding success (Ross), and these can be hard to predict. The romantasy trend was originally indie-led.
- It’s hard to chase trends because publishing lead-time is so long that trends can be over by the time a new book comes out (Durant). She is seeing the rise of fantastical elements in historical fiction – a point made on the earlier panel – plus mid-century settings.
- Per Khan, authors should build relationships with readers that go “beyond the book,” such as newsletter and blogs, both of which he maintains. Blogging is back, and authors should bring their storytelling skills to their blogs (Ross).
- AI can provide affordable options but is ethically controversial. The use of AI for audiobooks is an individual decision (Ross), and authors should be aware that many readers are against AI-created cover designs (Durant). There was a later session on AI in storytelling and publishing which I did not attend, but I may watch the recording.
I attended Sandra Beckwith’s “How to Market Historical Fiction in 2025,” which was a mixed bag. Maybe those who are newbies to marketing and promotion got more out of it. Much of the content was more broadly focused than just the HF genre, and I found the suggestions about the usefulness of generative AI for world-building and research assistance questionable (going by comments in the chat, I’m not alone). I’ve tested ChatGPT extensively for research questions and found the results inconsistent and unreliable. She did have useful tips for getting an Amazon author page up to speed before starting to promote a novel, and the importance of keeping an email list rather than relying on specific social media platforms.
Debra Borchert’s evening presentation, “Making Authentic Connections with Readers in Today’s Market,” was very good. Like many of you, I’ve watched countless author presentations, and I appreciate seeing new and unique content. Borchert writes a series about women during the French Revolutionary period, but this session wasn’t a self-promotion exercise. Instead, she spoke about how authors can discover new marketing opportunities and readerships by introducing themselves to venues based around their novels’ topics and themes. As an example, she has a passion for cooking soups and includes this within her storylines, along with recipes within her books; this has led to articles and other mentions in national publications and TV appearances. Not all pitches are successful, and the impact on sales wasn’t always directly observed, but they help establish personal branding and authority on a subject. By the end, the audience was very curious to learn more about her books, so it worked.
Lola Jaye’s session on weaving contemporary issues into historical novels was too early for me (5am!), so I’ll watch from the recording. I recommend her novel Orphan Sisters, which I reviewed in 2017.
In all, Day 1 of The History Quill convention was a worthwhile event, and I’m glad I took the day off work to attend. If you're interested in keeping up with the genre, I recommend checking it out next year.
- Editors and agents agree that authors should write what they like, but not all ideas are saleable, so it’s good to have multiple concepts in mind.
- For your first published novel, make sure it’s in a style or period you want to stick with, because readers/editors will want “the same, but different” for future books.
- The panelists named writers whose work they especially admired: Sarah Waters, Kate Quinn, Kate Atkinson, and Kate Mosse. Even though they move between settings and styles, their books share commonalities, such as high writing quality (Atkinson) and themes of female agency and friendship (Quinn), for example. Sarah Waters' Fingersmith was praised for having the best plot twist ever.
- Historical novels are getting shorter. Where 120K words was possible once, editors now expect closer to 100K.
- Writing courses are good for establishing discipline and forming a community, but after a point, having a reliable writing group to bounce problems/ideas off of is more helpful.
At 9am, one US literary agent, one UK agent, and a UK-based commissioning editor spoke about the HF book market in 2025. Jane Chun (Transatlantic Agency), Olivia Davies (United Agents), and Craig Lye (Canelo) had a wide-ranging discussion about trending subgenres, reader preferences, and the like. Some takeaways:
- Currently popular are genre-blends (R. F. Kuang’s Babel), since they have a crossover readership; this includes historical mysteries, thrillers, and horror. Over a third of current NYT bestsellers are historicals (Jane Chun). This was echoed by Olivia Davies, who spoke about the growth of historical horror and speculative HF, citing Kaliane Bradley’s The Ministry of Time, which “uses the past to open up the present.” Craig Lye mentioned the 80th anniversary of the end of WWII in 2025 and that other anniversary tie-ins lead to increased interest in the public psyche. He saw an interest in historical crime featuring famous figures, Greek myth retellings (ongoing), and Arctic exploration.
- Since the WWII market is saturated, we need new perspectives and less familiar settings (Chun). I think readers would agree with this too.
- On the political climate’s impact on the genre: readers are looking for escapism, but also novels that engage with political unrest in historical times (Davies); Chun agreed, saying children’s lit was more responsive to current events but was also subject to calls for banning. Lye said that politically focused novels needed to be backed by strong research and insight. One recent acquisition about the Ukraine war did well, but direct tie-ins to today’s politics can be a gamble.
- Multiple-timeline novels require extra work by their authors and need justification for why this format is needed (Chun). She receives many manuscripts of this type, some of which have so many characters and timelines that they’re hard to follow. I found this interesting since I often hear that adding a contemporary narrative to a historical novel can increase its audience. However, readers do notice if the parallel storylines aren’t well integrated and don’t carry equal weight, so Chun’s remarks are apt.
- Interest in unheard voices and underrepresented viewpoints continues to be strong. There was a (very predictable) question in the chat relating to cultural appropriation. Every time this question comes up in a panel discussion, which is a lot, the answer is the same, but the panelists made their points well. The consensus: authors have the freedom to write what they want, but make sure the research is sound, and ask themselves if they’re the right people to be telling the story.
- Ferdia Lennon’s Glorious Exploits, set during the Peloponnesian War but told in contemporary Irish vernacular, was mentioned both in this session (by Davies) and another one as noteworthy due to its strong voice and how well the mashup worked.
For the keynote session at noon, Amy Durant (co-founder and editorial director at Sapere Books), Vaseem Khan (historical crime novelist and Chair, Crime Writers’ Association), and Orna Ross (novelist and founder, Alliance of Independent Authors) spoke about the current state and future of historical fiction. Another valuable session. Some highlights:
- The increasing importance of publishing in multiple formats simultaneously (Durant), the growth of audiobooks, especially among indie authors (Ross), and comments on how the experience of reading dictates the format chosen; Khan explained how listening to Wolf Hall on audio was a completely different experience than reading the text. Ross spoke about the growth of deluxe hardback editions, even if readers had previously purchased a book in a different format.
- Author newsletters are important since while social media platforms change, email isn’t going away. It’s critical not to overpromote on social media.
- Specific niches are where authors are finding success (Ross), and these can be hard to predict. The romantasy trend was originally indie-led.
- It’s hard to chase trends because publishing lead-time is so long that trends can be over by the time a new book comes out (Durant). She is seeing the rise of fantastical elements in historical fiction – a point made on the earlier panel – plus mid-century settings.
- Per Khan, authors should build relationships with readers that go “beyond the book,” such as newsletter and blogs, both of which he maintains. Blogging is back, and authors should bring their storytelling skills to their blogs (Ross).
- AI can provide affordable options but is ethically controversial. The use of AI for audiobooks is an individual decision (Ross), and authors should be aware that many readers are against AI-created cover designs (Durant). There was a later session on AI in storytelling and publishing which I did not attend, but I may watch the recording.
I attended Sandra Beckwith’s “How to Market Historical Fiction in 2025,” which was a mixed bag. Maybe those who are newbies to marketing and promotion got more out of it. Much of the content was more broadly focused than just the HF genre, and I found the suggestions about the usefulness of generative AI for world-building and research assistance questionable (going by comments in the chat, I’m not alone). I’ve tested ChatGPT extensively for research questions and found the results inconsistent and unreliable. She did have useful tips for getting an Amazon author page up to speed before starting to promote a novel, and the importance of keeping an email list rather than relying on specific social media platforms.
Debra Borchert’s evening presentation, “Making Authentic Connections with Readers in Today’s Market,” was very good. Like many of you, I’ve watched countless author presentations, and I appreciate seeing new and unique content. Borchert writes a series about women during the French Revolutionary period, but this session wasn’t a self-promotion exercise. Instead, she spoke about how authors can discover new marketing opportunities and readerships by introducing themselves to venues based around their novels’ topics and themes. As an example, she has a passion for cooking soups and includes this within her storylines, along with recipes within her books; this has led to articles and other mentions in national publications and TV appearances. Not all pitches are successful, and the impact on sales wasn’t always directly observed, but they help establish personal branding and authority on a subject. By the end, the audience was very curious to learn more about her books, so it worked.
Lola Jaye’s session on weaving contemporary issues into historical novels was too early for me (5am!), so I’ll watch from the recording. I recommend her novel Orphan Sisters, which I reviewed in 2017.
In all, Day 1 of The History Quill convention was a worthwhile event, and I’m glad I took the day off work to attend. If you're interested in keeping up with the genre, I recommend checking it out next year.
Wednesday, February 05, 2025
Sisterhood, ghosts, and the meaning of freedom in Erin Crosby Eckstine's Junie, set in 1860s Alabama
The narrative voice in Junie sounds so assured that you wouldn’t realize it was a debut. The title character, just sixteen in 1860, has lived her whole life on Bellereine Plantation in rural central Alabama, as “property” of the McQueen family. Junie has hopes and dreams like any young woman, and her interior life is fully and richly described.
Although she shares household duties with her family—including her loving grandparents, Auntie Marilla, and cousin Bess—she primarily acts as companion to her white master’s daughter, Violet, who taught her to read. The teenagers share confidences and thoughts on literature; Junie has a fondness for British poetry, while her relatives worry that her head’s too much in the clouds.
Junie’s world is about to change. Already in financial distress due to the master’s alcoholism and irresponsibility, the McQueens are becoming nervous about potential war. When Mr. Beauregard Taylor, a wealthy suitor for Violet’s hand, arrives to stay at Bellereine, Junie—fearful of what Violet’s marriage will mean for her—undertakes a daring nighttime excursion that awakens the spirit of her late sister, Minnie, who had died after saving Junie from drowning. Minnie has several demands for Junie to accomplish on her behalf, and fulfilling them unearths terrible truths about life at Bellereine.
The eeriness of the ghostly visitations stands in effective contrast with the verdant beauty of the woods that Junie loves. The plotting is superb, with many unforeseen twists, and Junie is a compelling creation. Her growing closeness to the Taylors’ coachman, Caleb, is depicted with tender realism. Knowing that enslaved people’s futures aren’t their own, both hesitate to become too close. Still innocent in many ways as the novel begins, Junie is repeatedly tested, and she recalibrates the meaning of friendship, freedom, and sisterhood with every shocking revelation.
Erin Crosby Eckstine's Junie was published yesterday by Ballantine. This review was written for the Historical Novels Review's February issue. I was glad to see online, afterward, that Junie was picked up for the Good Morning America book club; it's their February pick.
Although she shares household duties with her family—including her loving grandparents, Auntie Marilla, and cousin Bess—she primarily acts as companion to her white master’s daughter, Violet, who taught her to read. The teenagers share confidences and thoughts on literature; Junie has a fondness for British poetry, while her relatives worry that her head’s too much in the clouds.
Junie’s world is about to change. Already in financial distress due to the master’s alcoholism and irresponsibility, the McQueens are becoming nervous about potential war. When Mr. Beauregard Taylor, a wealthy suitor for Violet’s hand, arrives to stay at Bellereine, Junie—fearful of what Violet’s marriage will mean for her—undertakes a daring nighttime excursion that awakens the spirit of her late sister, Minnie, who had died after saving Junie from drowning. Minnie has several demands for Junie to accomplish on her behalf, and fulfilling them unearths terrible truths about life at Bellereine.
The eeriness of the ghostly visitations stands in effective contrast with the verdant beauty of the woods that Junie loves. The plotting is superb, with many unforeseen twists, and Junie is a compelling creation. Her growing closeness to the Taylors’ coachman, Caleb, is depicted with tender realism. Knowing that enslaved people’s futures aren’t their own, both hesitate to become too close. Still innocent in many ways as the novel begins, Junie is repeatedly tested, and she recalibrates the meaning of friendship, freedom, and sisterhood with every shocking revelation.
Erin Crosby Eckstine's Junie was published yesterday by Ballantine. This review was written for the Historical Novels Review's February issue. I was glad to see online, afterward, that Junie was picked up for the Good Morning America book club; it's their February pick.
Friday, January 31, 2025
Historical fiction winners from the 2025 American Library Association Book and Media Awards
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The American Library Association and its RUSA division recently announced the winners in their annual Book and Media Awards. I always like hearing about these because the judging is done by librarians, and there are few national awards just for historical fiction. And because historical novels cross over into other genres (you’ve heard me discuss this before), the winners fall into multiple categories as well. This post focuses on fiction for adults.
On the Reading List, the ALA's annual awards in eight genre fiction categories, the award for Historical Fiction was won by The Lion Women of Tehran by Marjan Kamali, about women’s friendship in the politically volatile world of 1950s Iran.
The shortlist of Honor Titles for historical fiction includes:
All We Were Promised by Ashton Lattimore (1830s Philadelphia)
The Briar Club by Kate Quinn (1950s Washington, DC)
The Frozen River by Ariel Lawhon (18th-century Maine)
Masquerade by O.O. Sangoyomi (15th-century West Africa)
Leigh Bardugo’s The Familiar, Jewish-themed historical fantasy set in Renaissance-era Madrid, won in the Fantasy category, and the multi-period Kristin Perrin’s How to Solve Your Own Murder was rated tops in the Mystery category. The Romance category winner was Cat Sebastian’s You Should Be So Lucky, a gay sports-themed romance set in 1960s NYC.
The 2025 Andrew Carnegie Medal for Excellence in Fiction went to Percival Everett’s James, his retelling of Huckleberry Finn from the character Jim’s perspective.
On the Listen List for excellence in audiobook narration:
The Bullet Swallower by Elizabeth Gonzalez James. Narrated by Lee Osorio. A “magic realism western.”
The Frozen River by Ariel Lawhon. Narrated by Jane Oppenheimer.
James by Percival Everett. Narrated by Dominic Hoffman.
On the Notable Books List, which includes nonfiction and literary fiction, we have:
James by Percival Everett
Wandering Stars by Tommy Orange (multigenerational epic about trauma inflicted on Native Americans)
Whale Fall by Elizabeth O’Connor (coming of age on a Welsh island in the 1930s)
Wolf at the Table by Adam Rapp (a decades-spanning story about an American family’s proximity to violence)
Congrats to the winners!
Sunday, January 26, 2025
The Diamond and the Duke, a Napoleonic-era romance with a Beauty-and-the-Beast subplot
Lady Eleanor “Ellie” Balfour has loved Wesley Audley, illegitimate son of the Duke of Bentley, ever since he saw her practicing swordplay on her family’s Leeds estate as a teenager. He won her heart with his honesty, a refreshing change from her older brothers’ platitudes and her late father’s physical cruelty.
Several years later, Captain Audley returns from the Belgian battlefields injured and broken, not realizing that the lovingly supportive letters he’d received overseas had secretly been penned by Ellie, rather than the old girlfriend whose name Ellie had carefully signed. When Ellie looks at Wesley, she sees a kindred spirit and strives to heal him, if only he can bring his walls down. In truth, she’s in desperate need of healing herself.
This emotionally rich mixture of "Beauty and the Beast," Cyrano, and Bridgerton-style saga, set in the early 19th century, offers a multiplicity of romance tropes, which feels overcrowded at times, especially when the fake-relationship subplot appears. But Caldwell strikes a good balance between the serious theme of abuse recovery and the flirtatious hubbub of a pre-Regency London Season, and the couple’s visit to a female bonesetter adds originality. It’s a complicated road, but these wounded characters well deserve their happy ending.
The Diamond and the Duke was published by Berkley in 2024, and I covered it for the Historical Novels Review initially.
Caldwell is an impressively prolific Regency author. I receive many pitches for reviewing historical romances, and it's been interesting to see, in recent years, how readers and publishers have been leaning into romance tropes and denoting the specific plot pattern(s) the novel fits into. Examples include forced proximity, enemies-to-lovers, fake relationships, and so forth. One Amazon review describes this book as a "wounded warrior" romance, so there's another trope right there. Then, knowing what to expect, readers get to look forward to how these scenarios play out with each couple and setting. When an author tries to squeeze many of these tropes into a single book, as happened here, it gets to be a little much, but I did appreciate the original touches Caldwell added.
Several years later, Captain Audley returns from the Belgian battlefields injured and broken, not realizing that the lovingly supportive letters he’d received overseas had secretly been penned by Ellie, rather than the old girlfriend whose name Ellie had carefully signed. When Ellie looks at Wesley, she sees a kindred spirit and strives to heal him, if only he can bring his walls down. In truth, she’s in desperate need of healing herself.
This emotionally rich mixture of "Beauty and the Beast," Cyrano, and Bridgerton-style saga, set in the early 19th century, offers a multiplicity of romance tropes, which feels overcrowded at times, especially when the fake-relationship subplot appears. But Caldwell strikes a good balance between the serious theme of abuse recovery and the flirtatious hubbub of a pre-Regency London Season, and the couple’s visit to a female bonesetter adds originality. It’s a complicated road, but these wounded characters well deserve their happy ending.
The Diamond and the Duke was published by Berkley in 2024, and I covered it for the Historical Novels Review initially.
Caldwell is an impressively prolific Regency author. I receive many pitches for reviewing historical romances, and it's been interesting to see, in recent years, how readers and publishers have been leaning into romance tropes and denoting the specific plot pattern(s) the novel fits into. Examples include forced proximity, enemies-to-lovers, fake relationships, and so forth. One Amazon review describes this book as a "wounded warrior" romance, so there's another trope right there. Then, knowing what to expect, readers get to look forward to how these scenarios play out with each couple and setting. When an author tries to squeeze many of these tropes into a single book, as happened here, it gets to be a little much, but I did appreciate the original touches Caldwell added.
Saturday, January 18, 2025
The past echoes through the present in Charmaine Wilkerson's multi-period Good Dirt
Ranging across time and distance, Charmaine Wilkerson’s second novel (after the highly acclaimed Black Cake) stitches together a meaningful collection of stories about a proud American family and their most cherished heirloom, an oversized stone jar crafted by an enslaved potter in the early 19th century.
The premise reminded me of Tiya Miles’ All That She Carried, the National Book Award-winning historical narrative that traces the journey from slavery to freedom through a cotton sack passed down through generations, and I mentally nodded to see it mentioned as an influence in Wilkerson’s afterword.
In 2019, after her white fiancé fails to show at their wedding, Ebby Freeman takes off to rural France for a respite stay as caretaker for a friend’s rental cottage. The Freemans, well-off African Americans from New England, have a long, storied history involving the Tuskegee airmen and an early female physician, among others. The tragic and shocking murder of Ebby’s older brother Baz during a home invasion in 2000, which ten-year-old Ebby witnessed, turned an uncomfortable spotlight on the family during their grieving. The stone jug, called “Old Mo” for the initials (MO) carved into its side, had been broken during the crime.
Ebby’s failed relationship feels like an addition to their horrible luck, and when her ex, Henry, turns up to rent the French cottage (not as coincidental as this makes it sound) with his new girlfriend, Ebby has an overwhelming urge to run – but she doesn’t. Episodes from Old Mo’s history reveal themselves as Ebby turns her writing talents to retelling the “jug stories” she learned in childhood.
Good Dirt is mostly contemporary and offers the strongest narrative continuity in these sections. The historical segments, which grow more prominent after the midpoint, introduce a collection of important figures from the Freemans’ past: their foremother Kandia, captured in Africa; her son Moses, who inherits her pottery talents; and his artisan brother-in-law Willis, who flees the South Carolina backcountry for Massachusetts and adopts a new name; and a diversity of other people, Black, Native, and white.
The plot has ample surprises, including an unfolding mystery. It all adds up to a multi-voiced journey into American history, the forces that bend and shape us, and the courage in embarking on a new life.
Good Dirt will be published by Ballantine next week, and I read it from a NetGalley copy.
The premise reminded me of Tiya Miles’ All That She Carried, the National Book Award-winning historical narrative that traces the journey from slavery to freedom through a cotton sack passed down through generations, and I mentally nodded to see it mentioned as an influence in Wilkerson’s afterword.
In 2019, after her white fiancé fails to show at their wedding, Ebby Freeman takes off to rural France for a respite stay as caretaker for a friend’s rental cottage. The Freemans, well-off African Americans from New England, have a long, storied history involving the Tuskegee airmen and an early female physician, among others. The tragic and shocking murder of Ebby’s older brother Baz during a home invasion in 2000, which ten-year-old Ebby witnessed, turned an uncomfortable spotlight on the family during their grieving. The stone jug, called “Old Mo” for the initials (MO) carved into its side, had been broken during the crime.
Ebby’s failed relationship feels like an addition to their horrible luck, and when her ex, Henry, turns up to rent the French cottage (not as coincidental as this makes it sound) with his new girlfriend, Ebby has an overwhelming urge to run – but she doesn’t. Episodes from Old Mo’s history reveal themselves as Ebby turns her writing talents to retelling the “jug stories” she learned in childhood.
Good Dirt is mostly contemporary and offers the strongest narrative continuity in these sections. The historical segments, which grow more prominent after the midpoint, introduce a collection of important figures from the Freemans’ past: their foremother Kandia, captured in Africa; her son Moses, who inherits her pottery talents; and his artisan brother-in-law Willis, who flees the South Carolina backcountry for Massachusetts and adopts a new name; and a diversity of other people, Black, Native, and white.
The plot has ample surprises, including an unfolding mystery. It all adds up to a multi-voiced journey into American history, the forces that bend and shape us, and the courage in embarking on a new life.
Good Dirt will be published by Ballantine next week, and I read it from a NetGalley copy.
Tuesday, January 14, 2025
Review of Darry Fraser's The Night on the Darling River, set in late 19th-century Australia
On an evening in late August 1894, a mob of union sheepshearers boarded the paddle-steamer Rodney at its mooring along the Darling River in New South Wales, intent on overtaking the non-union workers heading upriver in defiance of a long-running strike. Darry Fraser deftly incorporates the burning and sinking of the Rodney, a pivotal event in Australian labor history, into a storyline about a host of worn-down characters desperate to improve their lives.
Tess Hawthorn, Alby Slattery, Bram Kempster, and Harry Goodwin grew up as farmers’ children in the river town of Echuca in Victoria, more thrown together by circumstance than friends. Now adults in their early thirties, the four have a convoluted history behind them, and more yet to come.
Tess ends up on the Rodney by accident. Fifteen years married to the abusive Alby, she courageously dons a disguise and flees their home but gets caught up in violence at the wharf and is forced onto the wrong boat. Also aboard are Bram, a reserved man who’s always loved Tess unrequitedly, as well as Alby – each for different reasons. Once Alby discovers Tess there, his anger is swift and irrevocable.
Their interactions move the story forward as their circumstances and environments change, including the rising floodwaters around Echuca. Fraser clearly adores rural Australia and powerfully re-creates it on the page, and her multifaceted characters feel like they belong there. Can Tess overcome her pride and self-protectiveness to accept the help she needs, and will she ever appreciate Bram for himself? After years of rejection and his own losses, does he even still want her? There’s also Harry, Tess’s dashing former crush, always caught up in a new scheme or three.
Into this tangled mix of personalities, Fraser drops in a zippy new character, Miss Eugenia Osborne. Her viewpoint is fabulous. Unlike Tess, “Jeanie” is a confident, wealthy, spoiled woman with a lusty appetite for burly men. Can she really be as superficial as she appears?
While Tess’s journey shows the author’s skill and sensitivity in depicting recovery from domestic abuse, Jeanie’s viewpoint adds unexpected humor. The odds are stacked against women in these depressed times, as evoked so convincingly by Fraser, and she and Tess, equally determined, have different ways of pushing through and surviving.
The Night on the Darling River was published by HQ Fiction (Australia) in December, and it's available for sale in the US on Kindle. Thanks to the publisher for the review copy via Austenprose; this review is part of the blog tour for the book.
Read more about the PS Rodney, whose shipwreck is now a heritage site in New South Wales, at ABC News Australia.
Tess Hawthorn, Alby Slattery, Bram Kempster, and Harry Goodwin grew up as farmers’ children in the river town of Echuca in Victoria, more thrown together by circumstance than friends. Now adults in their early thirties, the four have a convoluted history behind them, and more yet to come.
Tess ends up on the Rodney by accident. Fifteen years married to the abusive Alby, she courageously dons a disguise and flees their home but gets caught up in violence at the wharf and is forced onto the wrong boat. Also aboard are Bram, a reserved man who’s always loved Tess unrequitedly, as well as Alby – each for different reasons. Once Alby discovers Tess there, his anger is swift and irrevocable.
Their interactions move the story forward as their circumstances and environments change, including the rising floodwaters around Echuca. Fraser clearly adores rural Australia and powerfully re-creates it on the page, and her multifaceted characters feel like they belong there. Can Tess overcome her pride and self-protectiveness to accept the help she needs, and will she ever appreciate Bram for himself? After years of rejection and his own losses, does he even still want her? There’s also Harry, Tess’s dashing former crush, always caught up in a new scheme or three.
Into this tangled mix of personalities, Fraser drops in a zippy new character, Miss Eugenia Osborne. Her viewpoint is fabulous. Unlike Tess, “Jeanie” is a confident, wealthy, spoiled woman with a lusty appetite for burly men. Can she really be as superficial as she appears?
While Tess’s journey shows the author’s skill and sensitivity in depicting recovery from domestic abuse, Jeanie’s viewpoint adds unexpected humor. The odds are stacked against women in these depressed times, as evoked so convincingly by Fraser, and she and Tess, equally determined, have different ways of pushing through and surviving.
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The Night on the Darling River was published by HQ Fiction (Australia) in December, and it's available for sale in the US on Kindle. Thanks to the publisher for the review copy via Austenprose; this review is part of the blog tour for the book.
Read more about the PS Rodney, whose shipwreck is now a heritage site in New South Wales, at ABC News Australia.
Monday, January 06, 2025
Haunting family secrets across three generations in Ireland and America in Catherine Airey's Confessions
Airey’s intoxicating debut is much more than a saga following young women of Irish heritage across three generations.
Sixteen-year-old Cora Brady, orphaned after her accountant father’s death in 9/11, roams restlessly through Manhattan and her own memories of her artist mother’s suicide years earlier. A letter from an unknown aunt in Burtonport, County Donegal, which Cora recognizes as the setting of a choose-your-own-adventure computer game from her childhood, leads her to her parents’ Irish homeland and an unusual house. Text from the game acts as a framing device, an inspired authorial choice that increasingly deepens in meaning.
Beginning in 1974, in Ireland and New York, sisters Máire and Róisín Dooley come of age, finding romance and enduring displacement and emotional trauma. Much later, Cora’s daughter Lyca seeks out her family’s missing pieces.
Each narrative, conversationally yet eloquently phrased, has a bracing openness that transfixes one’s attention. Women seeking outlets for their tumbling emotions—via writing, art, and more—weave through this polyphonic story, as do the secrets and interpersonal connections that invisibly scaffold their lives.
Sixteen-year-old Cora Brady, orphaned after her accountant father’s death in 9/11, roams restlessly through Manhattan and her own memories of her artist mother’s suicide years earlier. A letter from an unknown aunt in Burtonport, County Donegal, which Cora recognizes as the setting of a choose-your-own-adventure computer game from her childhood, leads her to her parents’ Irish homeland and an unusual house. Text from the game acts as a framing device, an inspired authorial choice that increasingly deepens in meaning.
Beginning in 1974, in Ireland and New York, sisters Máire and Róisín Dooley come of age, finding romance and enduring displacement and emotional trauma. Much later, Cora’s daughter Lyca seeks out her family’s missing pieces.
Each narrative, conversationally yet eloquently phrased, has a bracing openness that transfixes one’s attention. Women seeking outlets for their tumbling emotions—via writing, art, and more—weave through this polyphonic story, as do the secrets and interpersonal connections that invisibly scaffold their lives.
This title is also recommended for YA readers, about which I wrote: Mature teens will be drawn into the honest storytelling and eager to discover how all the tales link up.
Confessions will be published by Mariner/HarperCollins next week; Viking Books (UK) is the British publisher. I wrote this draft review for the November 1 issue of Booklist.
There's so much more that can be said, beyond what a 175-word review can offer. The computer game from Cora's childhood is called "Scream School," which is also the novel's original title from when it went out on submission. However, it was changed on the advice of the US publisher, so as not to be misleading (it isn't horror fiction). The game features two Irish sisters who need to race against time to save the residents of a boarding school before they disappear. The 1970s-era setting comes through vividly in the storyline, which reflects the social attitudes of the time. Curious yet? Read more about the author's personal and writing background at EchoLive.ie.
Confessions will be published by Mariner/HarperCollins next week; Viking Books (UK) is the British publisher. I wrote this draft review for the November 1 issue of Booklist.
There's so much more that can be said, beyond what a 175-word review can offer. The computer game from Cora's childhood is called "Scream School," which is also the novel's original title from when it went out on submission. However, it was changed on the advice of the US publisher, so as not to be misleading (it isn't horror fiction). The game features two Irish sisters who need to race against time to save the residents of a boarding school before they disappear. The 1970s-era setting comes through vividly in the storyline, which reflects the social attitudes of the time. Curious yet? Read more about the author's personal and writing background at EchoLive.ie.
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