Thursday, August 01, 2013

The Power of Point of View, a guest post by Victoria Wilcox, author of Inheritance

Victoria Wilcox, author of Inheritance, the outstanding first book in her biographical fiction trilogy about Doc Holliday (see my review from 7/22), has contributed an essay about how she used point of view to show all the facets of her protagonist's character, even ones that don't agree with our own moral values, while retaining our sympathy for him.  It takes careful skill on an author's part to do this, and I think both readers and writers will get a lot out of her post.  Thanks to Victoria, we also have a giveaway for a copy of Inheritance which is open to readers in the US, Canada, and the UK.


The Power of Point of View
Victoria Wilcox

Sarah Johnson's wonderfully written review of Inheritance, the first book in my historical novel trilogy, Southern Son: The Saga of Doc Holliday points out one of the challenges in writing fiction set during the American Civil War and Reconstruction: the difficulty of dealing with the "inherent racism” of the time. Although the Southern Confederacy was fighting for more than slavery in its war on the Federal government, the perpetuation of the “peculiar institution” was at the core of the fight. So a writer telling a story set in the Old South has to acknowledge the central issue of the era, even if that issue isn’t a central theme of the book.

It would be tempting to insert one’s modern perceptions into the narrative, commenting on or criticizing the racist attitudes of the times. Such editorial comment, however, puts a distance between the reader and the characters and detracts from the sense of time and place of the story. How, then, to accurately show the social ills of the Old South without seeming to approve of them? Without some negative commentary the story might seem to celebrate the institution of slavery.

My solution to this literary dilemma was found in telling the entire story of Southern Son in the Third Person Limited point of view, never leaving the mind of John Henry Holliday. The reader sees only what John Henry sees, hears, or learns, which means that there is no escape from witnessing, and being party to, his 19th-century attitudes. He doesn’t consider himself racist (the term may not even have existed in his vocabulary), and he offers no apology for having such thoughts – which the reader then has to share.

Of course this is sometimes uncomfortable – as it is meant to be. The narrator doesn’t need to tell us that John Henry’s attitudes are wrong, and the writer certainly doesn’t need to step in and make the point. The reader will draw those conclusions, being uncomfortable with the things John Henry says and does but unable to get away from those things. The effect is a very personal experience with the mind and heart of a 19th-century man in the last days of the Old South.

Yet in spite of his many flaws, or perhaps because of them, John Henry remains a very sympathetic character. When he does wrong, we want him to do right. When he fails, we want him to succeed. Such personal emotion for an imagined character is the power of the Third Person Limited point of view, putting us solely in the heart of the protagonist and no one else. We care about his life, because his life is all we have.

The second book in the trilogy, Gone West, introduces John Henry to the historical character of Barney Ford, a former runaway slave turned wealthy hotel owner. When Holliday unthinkingly comes to the man’s defense, it’s a telling action that his racial attitudes are changing. By the end of the third book, The Last Decision, Holliday himself comments on the racist attitudes of others, as he finally learns what the reader always knew. And through the Third Person Limited point of view, in the end, we share in his victories.

But Southern Son isn’t about race, any more than John Henry’s life was about racist thinking. It’s a story of heroes and villains, dreams lost and found, families broken and reconciled, of sin and recompense and the redeeming power of love – all seen through the eyes of an American legend.


Inheritance was published by Knox Robinson in hardcover in May ($27.99, £19.99, €26.99, 349pp) and as an e-book ($5.99).  For more information, see the author's website at

If you're in the US, Canada, or the UK and would like the chance to win a copy of Inheritance, please fill out the following form.  Deadline Friday, August 9th.  Good luck!

This giveaway is now closed.


  1. Awesome guest post -- Wilcox did an amazing job with John Henry. She's right about how discomforting his thoughts made me feel, but it was also spot on. I just loved this book!

    1. The post pretty much describes my experience reading Inheritance, too. Plus it makes me look forward to the next two books even more!